Boy who never smiled for 4 years.
As I'm coming home from the military 4 years since I haven't been back. But still I can smell the beautiful roses and the nicest people greeting me from coming back. Even though I'm just here to just protect my family. Hopefully this machine gun can protect me from everything that misfortunate happens to my family. My family was always the most hated person in the village. But still everyone always forgives everyone because everybody knows that people all do bad things. But always they never forgive my family I don't know why. I just say were different but are we really? Yes, I'm from a poor royal family but still I will always represent the name Johnathan Nell. As I am walking home I feel an odd rush of air as if something really wrong is going to happen, something really surprising. Out of instinct I turned around and knocked a guy out with my machine gun. I examined him he look like he was about to kill me with the rusty knife in his hands. Now that think about I haven't even smiled not 'till I can remember the last smile my mouth ever formed was when I was at home playing with my brother Sean. But then all of a sudden I heard a loud noise outside then that's when they took me away. For thence I have never smiled before. I hope they don't think wrong of me. Just because I won't, it's not my fault don't blame anything on me. Standing outside my old home there's n0thing new to it except my father had painted the warehouse a different color Rosy pink. My little sister Ally must of requested it. "Mother is that you"? I said yes now honey come in the garage I have a huge surprise for you. I eyed my mother as if I couldn't trust her anymore. I knew she let the solders to take me away but I really don't care she looked happy to see them take me away. But still I must respect and honor my mother even from bad or worse. As the garage was opening I heard shuffling feet inside the garage but when it opened there was nobody in it. Then all of sudden somebody covered my eyes with a towel. I screamed and ran for my machine gun. But it was gone it wasn't on me anymore. I told my mum if anything happens to her or anybody else in the family I won't ever forgive myself. If she set this up I will never forgive you. She said " honey that's not nice I planned this out for 4 years already be nice and listen to me mum. Then all of sudden they took the towel off and all my friends and all my family was screaming "Welcome back"!!!!. For 4 years I actually was surprised and smiled widely. Tears started rolling down my cheeks then I smiled again and said as I was trying to gasp for breath " I missed you all"!! The we all hugged and then I thought to myself I guess when I was coming back it looked deserted but then it was just me everybody was here. That's the story of the Boy who never smiled For 4 years....


4 Comments:
you write way to much.
u have too many mistakes..REVISING!!!
i think that you write a little to much
i think that you are good
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