I changed History o.0
As Shelena was reading a book about World War II under the clear blue sky. She saw that there wasn't any women fighting in the war. She was very angry about this. She wished and wished with all her might to put her in the book. Her wish had come true. She was in the middle of the war, everybody was shooting. She was in the middle of the fight against the Germans and The British and Americans. From all the people that was dying she was so afraid she was crying and she had never cried this hard before. She ran to the British and the Americans. All the soldiers was astonished by a lady fighting in the war. She grabbed a 22 ml (gun), she got up and said fiercely above all the shootings and said"I'm going to fight in the war I don't care about what you people say I'm doing it no matter what!" "Also don't ever underestimate a woman!" She started shooting even though, while she was shooting she was shaking badly. She had got shot in the shoulder she was screaming in pain but she still went on and on. She was getting dizzy from the lost of blood. She fell down shuddering while laying there one of her comrades came up and picked her up and said "you did well." Wishing with all her might she poofed back into the present. She opened her eyes and she was under the tree and her book was laying beside her. She touched her shoulder it was fine. She was surprised that her life is in the book in World War II. There was a quote that said "This fine young lady had fought in the war we don't know who this young lad is but she made us win the war thanks to her."


1 Comments:
Hi Gabby,
All I can say is WOW!!!!!
Your blog and your writing is fantastic. You have a lot of great stories in your head. Plan your stories before you start to write and they will be easier for readers to follow.
When you publish your first book, mention me in the credits and send me an autographed copy!
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